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Thursday, October 31, 2024
Four Hypotheticals
In Which I Briefly Put On My Stand-Up Comedy Hat
As long-time readers of this blog may remember, I made a brief foray into the world of stand-up comedy.
It wasn't much, really -- a couple of open mic sets, IIRC one of them a two-minute and the second one a five-minute. Those two times weren't accidental. The first time you came to this particular open mic, you got two minutes. And if you got laughs, well, then, the next week the person running the thing would give you five minutes if you wanted.
I got laughs both times. I started working on a "tight ten" minute routine, which is the next step and maybe one you get to do as one of the minor comedians in a "real" show instead of at an open mic ... and then the pandemic hit, everything just shut down, and at some point I lost interest. My main reason for messing with it in the first place was that I thought it might reduce my fear of public speaking. I think it did.
Anyway, that's all by way of establishing my (exceedingly minimal) credentials as an authority on whether or not a joke works. Whether it's good. Whether it's something the person who came up with should expect to get laughs out of. So:
There are a number of different "formulas" for writing jokes.
My own favorite such formula is to start talking about something people recognize, understand, are familiar with, or can identify with, then take a sudden, unexpected turn on that subject. You lull them, then you shock them. It may take five seconds or five minutes to move from the wholly relatable premise to the "wow, that was completely unexpected" turn, but that's the formula.
Here's a not really very good joke I posted to this very blog, one of my early attempts, way back in 2014 (years before I braved a microphone and a live audience). It uses that formula.
Wholly Relatable Premise: I tried to break up with my girlfriend. Told her we shouldn't date any more. Told her adieu.
Wow, That Was Completely Unexpected Turn: So now she thinks we're married.
Here's another one that I posted to Facebook in May of 2020. Similar formula, but it has a little kick after the turn. This one got me contacted by another comedian I'd done those two open mics with. He was trying to set up his own open mic at a different bar, and he wanted me to show up because he liked it. But you know how long the pandemic, and the accompanying public event restrictions, dragged on. And it happens to be about those restrictions.
Wholly Relatable Premise: I was at the store today and a woman walked up to me and informed me that having my nose hanging outside my mask is like having my penis hanging outside my pants. I looked at her for a minute, waiting for her to go on, and she looked at me for a minute waiting for me to respond. Finally, she said "do you understand what I'm saying?"
Wow, That Was Completely Unexpected Turn: I said "I think you're saying that you want to see my penis, but I'm not really sure."
Little Post-Turn kick: Then she ran away.
Maybe you laughed when you read those jokes. Maybe you didn't. I personally think they're a little better delivered vocally. When it comes to influences, I tend to lean toward e.g. Steven Wright or Mitch Hedberg. So imagine them delivered pretty much deadpan.
Warming up for Donald Trump at Madison Square Garden, comedian Tony Hinchcliffe used the same formula, in short form. It's quick punch, not rope-a-dope.
Wholly Relatable Premise: There’s a lot going on. I don’t know if you know this but there’s literally a floating island of garbage in the middle of the ocean right now.
Wow, That Was Completely Unexpected Turn: I think it’s called Puerto Rico.
My "professional" opinion:
He nailed it.
In any venue other than a presidential campaign rally -- particularly in the kind of venues he usually performs at, where he's known for taking a "roast" approach to everyone, everything, and everywhere -- that joke would have killed.
But when a joke is told at a presidential campaign rally, any person or group who feels insulted (and anyone who wants to play to that person or group) will treat it as a political statement on the part of the campaign rather than as "just" a joke by a comedian.
I'm not saying that's good or bad, just noticing that that's how things are. I'm not a Trump supporter, or a Harris supporter, nor do I have anything against Puerto Rico (in fact, it's probably in my top ten "places I'd like to visit, and could visit without getting a passport" list).
If all I knew of Hinchcliffe's ouvre was that joke -- and guess what, all I know of Hinchcliffe's ouvre is that joke! -- he would go (and has gone) on my list of "comedians I'd like to see live."
Wordle 1230 Hint
Hint: Think Tales, Science, or Al.
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First Letter: W
Wednesday, October 30, 2024
NFL Week 9 Picks
NFL Week 9 starts Thursday (tomorrow) night with the Houston Texans playing the New York Jets. Here are my picks, as entered in ESPN's "Pigskin Pick'em" game. "Upset" picks -- that is, picks where I'm in the minority as to who will win -- have asterisks next to them.
- Houston Texans beat New York Jets
- Atlanta Falcons beat Dallas Cowboys
- Buffalo Bills beat Miami Dolphins
- Cincinnati Bengals beat Las Vegas Raiders
- Cleveland Browns beat Los Angeles Chargers*
- Tennesse Titans beat New England Patriots*
- Washington Commanders beat New York Giants
- Carolina Panthers beat New Orleans Saints*
- Baltimore Ravens beat Denver Broncos
- Chicago Bears beat Arizona Cardinals
- Philadelphia Eagles beata Jacksonville Jaguars
- Detroit Lions beat Green Bay Packers
- Seattle Seahawks beat Los Angeles Rams*
- Minnesota Vikings beat Indianapolis Colts
- Kansas City Chiefs beat Tampa Bay Buccaneers
Wordle 1229 Hint
Hint: An aspiring painter's first and most reliable supporter usually has three legs.
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First Letter: E
Tuesday, October 29, 2024
NFL Week 8 Results
- Minnesota Vikings beat Los Angeles Rams
- Baltimore Ravens beat Cleveland Browns
- Detroit Lions beat Tennessee Titans
- Miami Dolphins beat Arizona Cardinals*
- New York Jets beat New England Patriots
- Atlanta Falcons beat Tampa Bay Buccaneers*
- Jacksonville Jaguars beat Green Bay Packers*
- Houston Texans beat Indianapolis Colts
- Philadelphia Eagles beat Cincinnati Bengals
- Buffalo Bills beat Seattle Seahawks
- Washington Commanders beat Chicago Bears
- Denver Broncos beat Carolina Panthers
- Kansas City Chiefs beat Las Vegas Raiders
- San Francisco 49ers beat Dallas Cowboys
- Pittsburgh Steelers beat New York Giants
- Los Angeles Chargers beat New Orleans Saints
Wordle 1228 Hint
Hint: I want a girl who's fast, thorough, and sharp as a tack ... and who wears another term for today's Wordle above her short skirt.
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First Letter: T
Monday, October 28, 2024
How Enthusiastic Are People About Politics, Really?
I'm Considering An Auction or Dueling Fundraiser, But Want Opinions First
- Set up an auction -- whoever bids the most gets to tell me whether the mustache comes off, or whether I keep it for some minimum time post-auction (with exceptions for medical emergencies, i.e. facial surgery or whatever); or
- Just hold dueling fundraisers, with me doing the will of the team/side that donates the most (with the same exception for shaving it if medically required for some reason, even if the fundraising result is "keep it").
Travis Kelce: Broken Down, Distracted, or Under-Utilized?
Wordle 1227 Hint
Hint: If today's Wordle was a color, that color would be either "blue" or "off."
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First Letter: B
Sunday, October 27, 2024
Wordle 1226 Hint
Hint: If I'd been through the desert on a horse with no name, once we got to the beach I'd give it this name.
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First Letter: S
Saturday, October 26, 2024
Wordle 1225 Hint
Hint: Crying havoc is one thing; actually causing it is today's Wordle.
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First Letter: W
Friday, October 25, 2024
I Learned Quite A Bit About One Aspect of Artificial Intelligence ... From A Motorcycle Video
Wordle 1224 Hint
Hint: Don't worry, be happy -- turn today's Wordle upside down!
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First Letter: F
Thursday, October 24, 2024
Wordle 1223 Hint
Hint: I find today's Wordle annoying -- it won't stop trying to tell me what to do.
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First Letter: B
Wednesday, October 23, 2024
NFL Week 8 Picks
NFL Week 8 starts Thursday night with the Minnesota Vikings playing the Los Angeles Rams. Here are my picks, as entered in ESPN's "Pigskin Pick'em" game. "Upset" picks -- that is, picks where I'm in the minority as to who will win -- have asterisks next to them.
- Minnesota Vikings beat Los Angeles Rams
- Baltimore Ravens beat Cleveland Browns
- Detroit Lions beat Tennessee Titans
- Miami Dolphins beat Arizona Cardinals*
- New York Jets beat New England Patriots
- Atlanta Falcons beat Tampa Bay Buccaneers*
- Jacksonville Jaguars beat Green Bay Packers*
- Houston Texans beat Indianapolis Colts
- Philadelphia Eagles beat Cincinnati Bengals
- Buffalo Bills beat Seattle Seahawks
- Washington Commanders beat Chicago Bears
- Denver Broncos beat Carolina Panthers
- Kansas City Chiefs beat Las Vegas Raiders
- San Francisco 49ers beat Dallas Cowboys
- Pittsburgh Steelers beat New York Giants
Wordle 1222 Hint
Hint: Gawrsh, Walt, what a wacky Wordle! Hoo hoo hoo hoo!
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First Letter: G
Tuesday, October 22, 2024
Well, This Could Get Interesting ...
We therefore demand that you immediately provide and publicly release the full, unedited transcript of the 60 Minutes Interview with Kamala Harris. Additionally, in contemplation of possible litigation, we demand that you preserve all communications and documents relating to this Interview, together with any edits of the Interview's content, and that you refrain from destroying any relevant communications or documents.
NFL Week 7 Results
My Week 7 picks, green for correct ones, red for incorrect ones:
- Denver Broncos beat New Orleans Saints*
- Jacksonville Jaguars beat New England Patriots
- Atlanta Falcons beat Seattle Seahawks
- Buffalo Bills beat Tennessee Titans
- Cincinnati Bengals beat Cleveland Browns
- Green Bay Packers beat Houston Texans*
- Miami Dolphins beat Indianapolis Colts*
- Minnesota Vikings beat Detroit Lions*
- Philadelphia Eagles beat New York Giants
- Las Vegas Raiders beat Los Angeles Rams*
- Washington Commanders beat Carolina Panthers
- Kansas City Chiefs beat San Francisco 49ers
- Pittsburgh Steelers beat New York Jets
- Baltimore Ravens beat Tampa Bay Buccaneers
- Los Angeles Chargers beat Arizona Cardinals
Wordle 1221 Hint
Hint: Into metal? You might do today's Wordle out loud, or at the devil.
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First Letter: S
Monday, October 21, 2024
Wordle 1220 Hint
Hint: With one you can eat soup. Find two and you've got yourself a musical instrument.
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First Letter: S
Sunday, October 20, 2024
Wordle 1219 Hint
Hint: As propositions go, today's Wordle is risky and unpredictable.
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First Letter: D
Saturday, October 19, 2024
I Guess I Kind of Phoned It In ... Maybe?
Wordle 1218 Hint
Hint: Think "optic" or "dietary."
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First Letter: F
Friday, October 18, 2024
My First Sub-50-Degree Ride on the Italica Bulldog 150
Wordle 1217 Hint
Hint: The action component of being frugal or ungenerous. Also, a variety of sandpiper.
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First Letter: S
Thursday, October 17, 2024
And Here We Go With the Damn Writer's Block Again
NFL Week 7 Picks
NFL Week 7 starts Thursday night with the Broncos going up against the Saints. Here are my picks, as entered in ESPN's "Pigskin Pick'em" game. "Upset" picks -- that is, picks where I'm in the minority as to who will win -- have asterisks next to them.
- Denver Broncos beat New Orleans Saints*
- Jacksonville Jaguars beat New England Patriots
- Atlanta Falcons beat Seattle Seahawks
- Buffalo Bills beat Tennessee Titans
- Cincinnati Bengals beat Cleveland Browns
- Green Bay Packers beat Houston Texans*
- Miami Dolphins beat Indianapolis Colts*
- Minnesota Vikings beat Detroit Lions*
- Philadelphia Eagles beat New York Giants
- Las Vegas Raiders beat Los Angeles Rams*
- Washington Commanders beat Carolina Panthers
- Kansas City Chiefs beat San Francisco 49ers
- Pittsburgh Steelers beat New York Jets
- Baltimore Ravens beat Tampa Bay Buccaneers
- Los Angeles Chargers beat Arizona Cardinals
Wordle 1216 Hint
Hint: Trouble with today's Wordle? Try splitting it into two equal parts.
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First Letter: H
Wednesday, October 16, 2024
Wordle 1215 Hint
Hint: Consider today's Wordle hint a gift, not a loan.
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First Letter: G
Tuesday, October 15, 2024
Election 2024: OK, Here's Something That Could Affect the Outcome
- Issued a state-by-state prediction of outcomes; and
- Stood by that prediction instead of changing it at the last minute.
NFL Week 6 Results
- San Francisco 49ers beat Seattle Seahawks
- Jacksonville Jaguars beat Chicago Bears*
- Green Bay Packers beat Arizona Cardinals
- Indianapolis Colts beat Tennessee Titans
- Houston Texans beat New England Patriots
- Tampa Bay Buccaneers beat New Orleans Saints
- Philadelphia Eagles beat Cleveland Browns
- Washington Commanders beat Baltimore Ravens*
- Denver Broncos beat Los Angeles Chargers*
- Pittsburgh Steelers beat Las Vegas Raiders
- Detroit Lions beat Dallas Cowboys
- Atlanta Falcons beat Carolina Panthers
- New York Giants beat Cincinnati Bengals*
- New York Jets beat Buffalo Bills*
Wordle 1214 Hint
Hint: A tool for removing a sample from, or the center of, something.
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First Letter: C
Monday, October 14, 2024
So Yeah, The Blogging is A Little Bit Slower at the Moment
Wordle 1213 Hint
Hint: The whole scale, as in:
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First Letter: G
Sunday, October 13, 2024
Wordle 1212 Hint
Hint: Solving today's Wordle is all about position -- you're gonna have to get low.
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First Letter: P
Saturday, October 12, 2024
Wordle 1211 Hint
Hint: To pull an answer out of today's Wordle, try dish soap mixed with hydrogen peroxide and baking soda.
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First Letter: S
Friday, October 11, 2024
Wordle 1210 Hint
Hint: Windy, with sudden intermittent escalations.
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First Letter: G
Thursday, October 10, 2024
I'm Told That We Did Have a Pretty Good Blow Last Night ...
You Had One Job, Netflix
Wordle 1209 Hint
Hint: It's how you turn wood into a statue or a turkey into Thanksgiving dinner servings.
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First Letter: C
Wednesday, October 09, 2024
NFL Week 6 Picks
- San Francisco 49ers beat Seattle Seahawks
- Jacksonville Jaguars beat Chicago Bears*
- Green Bay Packers beat Arizona Cardinals
- Indianapolis Colts beat Tennessee Titans
- Houston Texans beat New England Patriots
- Tampa Bay Buccaneers beat New Orleans Saints
- Philadelphia Eagles beat Cleveland Browns
- Washington Commanders beat Baltimore Ravens*
- Denver Broncos beat Los Angeles Chargers*
- Pittsburgh Steelers beat Las Vegas Raiders
- Detroit Lions beat Dallas Cowboys
- Atlanta Falcons beat Carolina Panthers
- New York Giants beat Cincinnati Bengals*
- New York Jets beat Buffalo Bills*
Wordle 1208 Hint
Hint: Heather may have two, but Christina's was dearest.
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First Letter: M
Tuesday, October 08, 2024
Final Prep
NFL Week 5 Results
My Week 5 picks, green for correct ones, red for incorrect ones:
- Atlanta Falcons beat Tampa Bay Buccaneers*
- Minnesota Vikings beat New York Jets
- Chicago Bears beat Carolina Panthers
- Baltimore Ravens beat Cincinnati Bengals
- Miami Dolphins beat New England Patriots*
- Washington Commanders beat Cleveland Browns
- Jacksonville Jaguars beat Indianapolis Colts*
- Houston Texans beat Buffalo Bills*
- Las Vegas Raiders beat Denver Broncos
- San Francisco 49ers beat Arizona Cardinals
- Green Bay Packers beat Los Angeles Rams
- Seattle Seahawks beat New York Giants
- Pittsburgh Steelers beat Dallas Cowboys*
- Kansas City Chiefs beat New Orleans Saints